Quick Update – rewriting!

Hey guys,

After the initial response to Unchosen and after looking at it again after a month or so, I came to the conclusion that it needed to be better. So I’m doing a full rewrite.

The story is the same, but I’m trying to make it more, well, interesting. I think I sent this one out before it was ready and it’s a little heavy on internal exposition and a little light on external action. Especially in the beginning.

So, I’m fixing that.

Please share your thoughts.

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